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“At Your Feet”






What words might I give you?
Elegance from the Orient East?
Perhaps golden nights in The Tropic Isles.
Soothing to the senses.
So too please.
Balmy eyes rest.
Palm breezes blow tastes of wishful sleep.
Awakening with the dew.

What sights would I give you?
Never ending panorama?
Lights that glitter and turn to gamma.
Eyes that see no other.
Hands at your beck and call.
Praise at your feet for all.

What woe could I cause you?
Turn my back in keen?
Let no door be ever seen.
Enmity at your heel.
Gauntlet to the face so real.

No words can show the grief of a love torn apart from the heart.
Only dutiful steps will carry you through the paragraphs of life.
Only you can write your story from the start.
Being careful who you place as characters and their parts.

I, who have nothing to say, say it all, but my words are swept away.
Leaving to another what more eloquently should be said.

And in doing so, I bow down in humility and the lowering of my head.



©2010 H.A.Irwin,Jr.
 


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Shane
02/27/2011 19:08

I'll take golden nights, panoramas, and the gauntlet.

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Elaine-meatwosocks
02/27/2011 20:30

_"I who have nothing to say, say it all, but my words are swept away.
leaving to another what more eloquently should be said"_ I Love that, and the last line also.

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cherry rose
02/27/2011 21:06

Hank this is so beautiful , magical No words can show the grief of a love torn apart from the heart.
Only dutiful steps will carry you through the paragraphs of life.
Only you can write your story from the start.
Being careful who you place as characters and their parts. "

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Hank
02/28/2011 06:54

Jason, you sound like a game show host brother Haha! Thanks for coming by my friend.
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Mea...I don't know what to say :)
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Thank you very much Cherry <3

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02/28/2011 17:02

Hello hon.... this is rich and powerful....speaks to me on so many levels....

'I who have nothing to say, say it all...'

Really resonates with me...

...so glad I finally found you here....
sharonlee

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02/28/2011 17:04

http://sharonlee-innerreflections.blogspot.com/

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Hank
03/01/2011 09:10

Hey Sharonlee, glad you could make it by hun. I bookmarked and subbed to your page too ok? Looks groovy sweet heart. Glad you liked the write too *hugs!!!*

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Leccie
03/01/2011 10:07

Hey Bushi :)

I did stop by before, this place is shaping up. This is peaceful and wise, a real smooth read

<3

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izumi
03/02/2011 10:54

beautifully written, our sad struggles with our heart to someone, enjoyed this, keep up your website, looking quite nice! xoxo izzy

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Hank
03/03/2011 09:10

Hey Sammy :) Thanks for coming by hun. Glad you liked it.
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Domo Izumisan, domo. I am so happy you could come by my sister. *jumping for joy*

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03/03/2011 13:29

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Hank
03/03/2011 15:07

Pauline!!!

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cheyenne
03/03/2011 15:52

i'm in awe of your writing skills Bushi ! :-)

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Hank
03/04/2011 14:36

{{{Chey!!!}}} I am so excited to see you girl. Love love love !!! your comment. *muah*

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Hank
03/07/2011 08:55

Deb...<3

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